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This love…This world…This life…What is it for?
Without you it means nothing anymore,
A plunge into darkness once you are gone,
Without you existence is a nothing more,
But a blind stumble in a rapidly dissolving world.
You could choose to keep on going on, but what is it for?
Locations vanishing in an all-engulfing fog,
Where would I choose to go, now that you are gone?
Some place where I can still feel your warmth,
And wish that you were here once more
Visualize a moment that has now passed on
Not to be recreated evermore.
Without you… There is no reason to carry on,
I failed to realize before, that you, - you are my world…
Without you it means nothing anymore,
A plunge into darkness once you are gone,
Without you existence is a nothing more,
But a blind stumble in a rapidly dissolving world.
You could choose to keep on going on, but what is it for?
Locations vanishing in an all-engulfing fog,
Where would I choose to go, now that you are gone?
Some place where I can still feel your warmth,
And wish that you were here once more
Visualize a moment that has now passed on
Not to be recreated evermore.
Without you… There is no reason to carry on,
I failed to realize before, that you, - you are my world…
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Well... what can I say... I'm not sure if I want to announce this one as being finished yet, but maybe some input will help me perfect it... Pretty sure, this doesn't exactly qualify as a sonnet, so just think of it as a sonnet wanna-be...lol 
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wow very cool! very nicely written!!